Red and the Trickery
There once was a very well known young lady named Rya.
However, in her town she was not known by this name, everyone called her Red.
This was due to the fact that she had long, beautiful, vibrant red hair. She
also always wore red clothes to match, with coordinating red lipstick and ruby
red shoes. Red was so well known because she was the granddaughter of the
richest woman in all of the land. Grandmother lived alone in a gorgeous highly
secured cabin privately set far into the woods. Red and grandmother were the
best of friends. Red went to visit grandma as many times a week as she possibly
could. In order to reach grandmother’s house she had to travel a path in which
she was very familiar with all by herself in the woods. However she was not
fearful, for she was a strong and independent young woman. Grandmother’s house
had the highest security system that you could ever imagine. Not even a machine
gun could make it through the walls. It was known by all that Red was the only
person alive that knew grandmothers security code to enter her house.
Grandmother trusted Red with all of her soul.
Now you see, it was every teenage girls dream in town to
become a model. All over girls longed for the opportunity to someday pursue
their dreams. They even held modeling clinics together so that one-day, if they
ever got the chance, they were prepared. Red was the leader of this club and
had the greatest passion for modeling.
In the village there also lived a family of wolves, that no
one associated with and everyone tried their hardest to avoid. All that was
left of the family was 4 brothers. Their parents passed away in a hunting
accident years prior and after that accident occurred the boys were never the
same. They became evil wolves that hated all humans and wanted nothing but revenge.
They were vicious young wolves that were feared by all. The oldest brother was by far the most evil 4 brothers.
The Eldest brother, Walter the wolf, knew everything that
was going on around town and knew everyone’s personal business. Walter was the
only brother who was old enough to support his siblings, and was struggling day
by day to do so. Knowing that grandmother was filthy rich and that Red dreamed
of being a model, he came up with a twisted plan that was extravagant, so he
thought…
Red was home alone on a warm summers day while her parents
were at work. Her mother always told her every day to never open the door for
strangers while she was home alone. Red was practicing her runway walk when
suddenly…
(Knock, knock, knock)
“Who goes there?” called Red from inside her house in the
heart of the village.
“It is I, Sir Walter Watson. You may not know me, but I am the President of a modeling agency called Surely Beautiful; maybe you have heard of it?”
“It is I, Sir Walter Watson. You may not know me, but I am the President of a modeling agency called Surely Beautiful; maybe you have heard of it?”
Red quickly fluffed her hair, checked her make up, and stood tall and confident as she flung open the door. Standing in front of her was the most handsome man she has ever laid her eyes upon. He was tall, dark, and well groomed in his suit and tie.
“Nice to meet you sir.” she said, shaking the man’s hand.
“My name is Rya, but people call me Red. How did you discover me?” wondered
Red.
“Ahh very wise
question young lady. You see, I ran into a very sweet woman this past week at
the market; she told me she had a beautiful teenage granddaughter who had
wanted nothing more than to get the chance to model. After she showed me your
picture I knew we needed to add you as a member to our team.” said the man.
"How flattering sir, I would be honored to be a part of your
agency and to pursue my dreams with Surely Beautiful. Let me just go call my
mother and make sure this is okay.” proclaimed Red.
“Oh no my dear!” called the man quick and loud. “That will
not be necessary. Your grandmother has already spoken to your mother and she
has given full permission.”
The man gave specific instructions for Red to follow, he
said, “simply run along quickly. You don’t need to bring anything but yourself.
Please leave your cell phone at home, as well as any other personal belongings.
Make sure not to speak a word to anyone of this opportunity, for it will be a
surprise. Please bake a cake, our cameramen
enjoy cake very much so and would love a small treat. Don’t forget chocolate
milk is their favorite as well!” he said.
“Oh and one more thing.” said the man, handing Red a piece
of paper. “Here are the directions you must take in order to get to our agency
building. Leave your house promptly in a half hour. We will be seeing you soon
my dear.” and off walked the man quickly pulling away in his car.
Red had not a clue what to think of what had happened.
She felt as though this seemed too good to be true and was worried to trust the
man’s word. But then she remembered her grandmother had referred her and her
mother had given full permission. She quickly baked the cake, grabbed the
directions, and headed on her way.
Walter Watson was indeed not named Sir Watson at all; in
fact, his name was Walter the wolf. Walter had the ability of transforming
himself into a handsome gentleman, of whom he called Sir Walter Watson. The
wolf knew that if he approached Red as Sir Watson, pretended to be part of a
modeling agency and told her that her mother and grandmother gave her
permission, that he could surely trick the girl into his evil plan.
Skipping down the path feeling elated, she began to notice
that she was familiar with her surroundings as she looked around.
“This is the way I take to grandmother’s house, the agency
must be right around the corner from her house and all this time I never knew
it!” thought Red.
Out of nowhere a big, scary wolf popped out at Red. “Hello
my friend!” she said to the wolf with no
fear at all.
When this didn’t scare Red enough, the wolf sent out another
brother to scare Red in order to hurry her along the path. This time, two
wolves had approached Red.
“Oh my goodness you startled me, have a good day men.” Red
said as she continued to skip along.
Surprised to see Red, grandmother said “My dear what a
pleasant surprise I was not expecting company.”
Throwing the cake and milk down on the table she said “Grandma
I am here because I am in great trouble, I was chased by three vicious wolves
in the woods and”…
Before Red could even finish her sentence the evil wolf had
jumped through the door and attacked grandmother. Right in front of Red’s eyes
she had to watch her grandmother get ripped to shreds by the wolf.
The next thing she knew she was waking up in a daze. The
last thing she remembered was seeing her grandmother’s life get ripped away from
her by a ferocious beast. With tears streaming down her face as she was gaining
her vision back, she realized she was strapped to a chair. Out of her blurred
vision she saw the wolf packing all of grandmother’s money, jewelry, and
valuables into a large duffle bag.
Quickly turning around the wolf explained to Red that there
was really no Sir Walter Watson after all, that he transformed himself in order
to gain Red’s trust and get her to unlock grandmother’s house. He told her that
there was no modeling agency and everything was simply a lie in order to trick
her. He explained why he needed the money to support his family and that he
chose grandmother because she was an easy target and the richest of them all.
She had defeated the wolf and given him what he deserved.
What happened to the grandmother and Red was nothing short
of a tragedy. Every day Red found it more difficult to cope with her
grandmother’s loss. The big bad wolf was dead, and the three other brothers
were locked in prison for life.
Red was the only person grandmother had included in her
will. It specified that all her money and everything she owned went to her
granddaughter Rya. Needless to say, Red had inherited all of her grandmother's riches.
With these funds, she decided to start up her own modeling agency in which she
named Granny’s. She was the president of this organization and gave all young
girls the chance they had always hoped for to fulfill their dreams.
Red learned her lesson that mother always told her to never
open up the door for strangers when she was home alone. The people of the
village were inspired by Red’s strength and courage. They also admired her for
taking the wolves out of their town so they no longer had to live in fear. Red
and her family were then able to live a comfortable life knowing they were safe, but they missed
grandmother more with every day that had passed.
Did a very good job at explaining the stories and talking about what each character said to each other. Also showed that you new how to make the wolf that bad guy in tricking Red and the grandmother. My favorite part was the Walter the Wolf part when he tricks her with the modeling agency (very creative). Great Job!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteYou excellently mixed two stories together, which is very creative and splendid. All the characters have their own specific characteristics to show the theme. And the plots are wonderful. It's a great story!
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