It was a beautiful Fall day when Lisa’s mother
texted her asking her to bring her sick grandmother the cake and flowers she
bought the night before. Lisa’s grandmothers house was only a few blocks away
but Lisa was annoyed with this request because she was FaceTiming her best friend
from her brand new iPhone 5s. Annoyed by the request of her mother, Lisa
responded to her mother’s text with a “k, I will later.” Lisa’s mother has been
trying to get her daughter more active and off her phone so she told her
daughter that she must go now and stay off all of her social networks on her
way there because her grandmother was waiting.
Lisa was so angry that she had to end her FaceTime
with her best friend early that she grabbed the cake and flowers and stormed
out to her grandmother’s house.
Ignoring her mother’s request, Lisa stopped and took
a picture of a beautiful Fall tree that had its’ leaves changing. After taking
the picture she realized that she had to Instagram it so all of her followers
could see how beautiful it was. Every time she got a new “like” on the picture
she had to stop and see who it was. This was slowing down her trip to her
grandmother’s house tremendously.
An hour’s time had passed and Lisa had still not
arrived to her grandmother’s house. Aware of this fact, Lisa’s mother called
her to see where she was.
“Lisa!
Where are you!?”
“Chill,
Mom! I am almost there!”
“What
is taking you so long? Your grandmother has been sitting with her door unlocked
for an hour waiting for you to show up. What don’t you understand about staying
off your social networks and going straight there?”
“Mom!
I am almost there. I had to Instagram this beautiful tree that I passed. It’s not
my fault that so many of my friends keep liking it causing my Google maps to
skip directions.”
“Lisa,
you have become way to obsessed with your smart phone and social networks. Go
directly to your grandmother’s house. No more stopping. After you mingle with
her for a while return home and I am taking your phone away for a week.”
“Ugh!!
You are the worst!”
Now
even more annoyed with her mother, Lisa once again stopped and updated her
Facebook status one last time since she knew her phone was going to get taken
away when she got home. “My mom can be so annoying sometimes. I am on my way to
my sick grandmothers and she won’t stop yelling at me for every little thing.
She is even taking my phone away from me when I get home!—feeling annoyed”
Along with this Facebook status she tagged the exact address of her
grandmother’s house.
Jamie,
Lisa’s friend from school, was on her Facebook and left it open when she went
to take her dog out. Jamie’s older brother, Sam, had just been released from
jail for drugs and was currently in a relapse. He needed money to buy more
drugs and was willing to do anything.
Sam
saw Lisa’s most recent Facebook status and thought to himself, “What a great
target. An old sick woman and a helpless little teenager. I am sure this old
hag has a ton of money lying around in her house.”
Sam
jumped in his car and headed to the address he had seen in the Facebook status.
Meanwhile,
Lisa was still taking her time walking to her grandmother’s house because she
knew the quicker she got home, to sooner her phone would be taken away. She
spent majority of her time on Instagram and Facebook but she had also been
sending out Tweets about how she wasn’t going to have her phone.
Due
to this, Sam had gotten to her grandmother’s home before Lisa did. He stormed
inside, yelling at grandma. He made her give him all her money, open the safe,
and took all her valuable jewelry. Once he gathered everything, he whispered in
her ear, “You can thank your granddaughter”.
The
second Lisa arrived to her grandmother’s drive way, she knew something was
wrong. The front door was wide open so she started to run towards it. As she
was running towards the door, Sam was running out and pushed her down. Lisa
only got a glimpse of Sam because she was so startled. She ran inside and found her grandma laying
scared to death on her bedroom floor next to the open, empty, safe.
“Grandma!
What happened?”
“Honey,
call the cops. I have been robbed. He took everything.” she yelled.
Her
grandmother was devastated about all of her jewelry and couldn’t stop crying.
Obeying the request of her grandmother, Lisa called 911. After she hung up, she
ran back over to her grandmother to try and comfort her.
“Grandma,
do you have any idea who did this? I saw him when he was running out but he
pushed me over and I could only get a glimpse of him.”
In
the midst of crying, her grandmother responded with “I have no idea, honey. But
he told me to thank you. Do you have any idea of what he meant?”
“Me?
No grandma. I have absolutely no idea. I have never even seen that man before.”
Puzzled
by the comment the burglar had said to her grandmother, Lisa comforted her grandmother in fear
while they waited for the cops and Lisa’s mom to show up to the house. The cops
questioned both Lisa and her grandmother to get all the details of the
burglary. After about an hour of questioning and getting the details of what
was stolen, the cops left to do some investigating.
Two
days passed and they had still not heard any news on the case.
The
next morning, Sam was busted for possession of cocaine. On him they found a
bunch of Lisa’s grandmother’s jewelry which he then admitted to stealing days
before. When asked about why he stole from the old lady he responded with.
“Ha,
my little sister left her Facebook open and I saw that dumb little Lisa’s
status about her sick grandma who was all alone. The address was right there.
She was basically begging me to go steal from her.”
When
the cops found this out they called in Lisa and her mother. They informed them
of what Sam had said and told Lisa how important it was for her to be more
careful about what she posted on the Internet.
This
event traumatized Lisa and she never posted about her location on the Internet
again.
By: Tara Caples
Very good, People really need be more careful of what that post on social medias because the internet is forever and creeps around lurking around. My guess this is about the company of Wolves, very different and I like that you use our time area for your setting. My only favorite part is when Lisa learned her lesson.
ReplyDeleteVery good story Tara. It was well written and connected all of it's pieces together. You seem to be very in touch with Lisa's phone struggles, maybe you can relate lol? Either way you modernized an old tale to fit a current issue and it worked very well. Good job!
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